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Whispers
Contributed by
SuicideParty
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It lingers in the silence of forgotten conversation
It bleeds and breeds in darkness – a rather wicked procreation
Its web of broken shadows form a twisted art display
A curse within a gift begins a debt you can’t repay
Like a haunting melody from a song you can’t recall
Long forgotten, once remembered as your end begins your fall
Silent sentries leer at nothing, but they frighten all the same
Your fears are called unfounded but the causes still remain
So protect yourself from what so many tell you isn’t real
Never falter in conviction what you know is what you feel
At the end of all that’s mortal just remember what you’ve learned
If you cry for nothing else, weep for the crosses that you’ve burned
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SuicideParty
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2004-11-01 12:09:05]
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Re: Whispers
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:11:00 PM AEST
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an emotional write, written with great expression I think that we have all burned a few crosses in our lives, I know I have
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Whispers
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:42:56 PM AEST
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amazing way with words, a incredable piece. keep on writing!
peace |
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Re: Whispers
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:52:36 PM AEST
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| really nice poem..definatly a good read..nice work =] |
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Re: Whispers
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:35:02 PM AEST
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| wow, i love it, such an incredible piece! |
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Re: Whispers
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:49:06 AM AEST
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| damn that was awesome... I am just not sure what it means... great write all the same though |
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