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Deceitful Mind
Contributed by
Catalina
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:02:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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* Deceitful Mind *
For I know,
These thoughts untrue…
Hold me prisoner,
& Separate me from you…
Lies, Lies, Lies,
Just dancing about in my mind…
My own thoughts are a trap,
For so long I have be blind…
Listen closely,
He’s whispering in my ear…
It won’t stop,
Believe not what I hear…
Where ever I roam,
I’ll never escape…
These thoughts unnerving,
Make not the mistake…
For the diseased mind,
Tells only twisted lies…
Breaking me down,
So much for peace of mind…
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Catalina
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2004-11-01 08:02:22]
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Re: Deceitful Mind
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:04:13 AM AEST
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sorry you feel this way, well written ,a sad write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Deceitful Mind
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:16:53 AM AEST
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| Is true the topic, if all listened to what they heard, we would be in deep doo doo permently, cool poem, you capture the essence of the subject, and painted unforgettible images with is poem, awesome write, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Deceitful Mind
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST
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Wow, how that brings back some memories and bad moments in my life, especially recently, pain is such an expressive emotion. Confusion even scarier. Keep writing.
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