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life in perspective
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:38:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my foundation is crumbling
my truths, a lie
something so wrong, within
confusion, neverending
darkness closing in on me
i'm scared
i promised myself i wouldn't fall again
but there i go
into the rabbit hole
and there, i realised
i'm insignificant
like an ungodly speck of dust
in the universe
my happiness becomes my pain
my death, my joy
i'm not as strong as i thought i was
and i feel helpless
like there's nothing i can do
and nobody else realises it
but we're vulnerable
more defenseless than we realise
no one's invincible
and while love leaves scars covering the soul
lonliness kills more than it saves
I can't live like this
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kailadragon
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2004-11-01 06:38:12]
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Re: life in perspective
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:50:11 AM AEST
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| awesome poem, written with feeling and unsureness, hope you find a way to get back on track, finding the peace you want. cool poem. |
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Re: life in perspective
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:30:08 AM AEST
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very sad and emotional write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: life in perspective
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by Catalina on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:28:19 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write... It's so odd how our happiness becomes our sadness... This was written so well. I look forward to reading more... |
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