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Vision Dances
Contributed by
Red_October
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is me ~ I am surreal
I perform vision dances
as free as the air I'll reveal
under me as I move
Star-gazing, I appeal to the moon
I paint watercolors
that dry too soon
but that's just the way I am
I care nothing for material things
I'd rather be bare
with my invisible wings
uninhibited from what you think of me
I am fragile ~ I want to stay that way
I drink my decaffinated herbal tea
as I move in harmony
with passionate wind
in my hair
This is me ~ I am surreal
I care not
about what you feel
when I am unclothed with electrical flair
I thrive in your lustful stare
and I'm quite sure you want to eat me alive
but I won't let you this time
because it's all about me...
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2004-11-01 02:28:50]
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Re: Vision Dances
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:07:21 AM AEST
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| What struck me most about this poem is the ethereal,carefree feel you put into it. Your good choice of words makes for really beautiful poetry. :) |
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Re: Vision Dances
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:17:23 AM AEST
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Very beautidull writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Vision Dances
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by persia on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:46:19 AM AEST
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I paint watercolours
that dry to soon-this is a beautiful line.
great poem! |
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Re: Vision Dances
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:39:45 AM AEST
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| awesome and beautifully written leaving a hauntingly aura and feel, cool poem. |
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Re: Vision Dances
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:53:51 AM AEST
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WOW that was beautiful, it leaves me wanting more.
Hugs,
Jane |
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