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In Search For I
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:34:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Branded by misery's kiss
Held my hand out for help
Only to have my face stomped into the ground
The sun does not shine here anymore
Immobilized by depression's sting
Whispered encouragement to myself
Only to fall on the deafened ears of this tragic mistake
The rain turns into snow,
But the crimson tinge
Is always unmistakeable
I won't buy into the hypocrisy you sell
Or the fake potions that held me down previously
Lied to myself for so long
Realized by the scars that I am forced to live with,
But I'd rather them than the poisoned kisses
That bleed [free] from your diseased mouth
Still forced to reason with the voices in my head
The rain turns into snow,
But the crimson tinge
Is always unmistakeable
Beat my will that I've fostered so carefully
And exploit my fear
That I've sought to hide from view,
But I'll never bow to your will
I'm no longer a child
And I can see through your thin lies
I'll never bleed alone again
And when I cry these tears
I'll go to the one who lived for thirty-three years
The choice is unmistakeable
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-10-31 23:34:08]
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Re: In Search For I
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:45:09 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:56:11 AM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:14:14 AM AEST
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| THIS IZ AWESOME! i love it, ive always admired your work. |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:31:55 AM AEST
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| Dude this was so vivid and painful, sadness leaked from each word, into a flood of hurts, visual images, blindingly real, written and composed beautifully, loved this poem it rocked. |
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Re: In Search For I
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 04:09:16 PM AEST
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An intriguing write joel, this is perhaps one of the best i have read of yours. beautiful poem. keep writing :)
char xxx |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:30:14 PM AEST
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Unmistakable BoBo poetry. You write of the darkness as well or better than anyone I know my friend. If this isnt your finest write then its damn close to it. The reference to He who lived for 33 years though, is the part that brough a huge smile to my face and a warm feeling to my heart.
Barkeep!!
Larry ;o) |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:27:56 AM AEST
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I don't know where your inspiration comes from but I want it for just an hour!!!!!!!
You write masterpieces.
Kie |
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Re: In Search For I
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:34:41 AM AEST
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| My dearest Joel..this is one of your many best writings.dark and powerful..sad and excellent poetry..I need not say it again that among poets who write dark poetry..you are my favorite...hugs my friend :-) venkat |
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Re: In Search For I
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:54:31 PM AEST
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The words are just sticking in the back of my thoat. not sure how to respond. I loved the anger and heavy word choice in here, there are just soooo many lines that I want to take from this piece or highlight but they all are just soo wonderful. This piece as a whole was spectacular.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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