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Desire
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you give to me your love
that I so Desire
You will create within my body
a never ending fire
This Desire that I have
gets stronger every day
My heart so full of love
more than words could say
When I look into your eyes
I can see your love as well
And the Desire that you have
impossible to quell
The two of us together
such a perfect pair
Full of love and Desire
in our life times we will share
Each and every moment
that we are apart
The Desire we both have
grows deeper in our heart
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-31 22:39:18]
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Re: Desire
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:28:05 PM AEST
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Bruce this is one fantastic write, i love it alot.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Desire
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:13:45 AM AEST
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| I still don't think you're writing about love..you're writing about sex. the word body gives you away..lol. I'm too old to be fooled..hope she's not..lol |
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Re: Desire
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by AliB on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:49:53 AM AEST
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You're such a romantic, I wouldn't mind a man saying that to me, it would definitely work!!
Another good write Bruce, keep 'em coming.
Ali xx |
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Re: Desire
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:37:26 AM AEST
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wonderful and beautiful write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Desire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:40:37 AM AEST
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| Another great write. Don't listen to a_bear, she's just lonely and only sees what she's looking for..........Mike |
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Re: Desire
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:23:05 PM AEST
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steamy romantic write as normal Bruce
Michelle |
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