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I want to kiss you
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:18:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to kiss you
And let me feelings free
Take you into my arms
Bite your lips and drink of thee
Close my eyes and live in you
I want to taste you
And have that taste haunt me
Even when I sleep I will
Dream of you and have it be real
And in that dream taste you
I want to feel your warmth next to me when
I need to and then
Wake up next to you and be mesmerized
By how beautiful you are
And that you even noticed me
I want to dress you in my arms
And have you live in my eyes
A permanent part of my soul
The only way I would be whole
You are amazing to me
In every way
In my eyes that is how you will stay
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:40:03 PM AEST
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| amazing. =] |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:33:17 PM AEST
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Wow this is a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:38:44 PM AEST
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| beautiful in every asspect |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:47:04 PM AEST
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very well written and slightly creepy, of course
maybe I just read it the wrong way. Good
poem whether its supposed to be taken in a
slightly vampiric way or not.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:22:58 AM AEST
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| Intense and passionately sensual,beautifully written, and vividly composed, leaving little to the imagination, an awesome write, one I enjoyed reading, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:38:26 AM AEST
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such an amazing write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I want to kiss you
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:03:23 PM AEST
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Great write,
i want to dress you in my arms
and have you live in my eyes
a permanent part of my soul
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