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Without You
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM in AEST
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Without You
This anger burns
Because of you
Burning the bridges
That I came from
I have no where to go
And nothing to live for
I can't run to the past anymore
That bridge was burned before
With fear I can't move forward
In the flames is my last comfort
Lost without you forever more
You pushed me to the edge
And I fell away from fear
You pushed me away
As if you didn't care
You burned the bridges
So that I could live
Without my fear
But the cost was you
And the cost was dear
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2004-10-31 20:37:07]
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Re: Without You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:44:50 PM AEST
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very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Without You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:05:16 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write... you can feel the pain and alot of emotions in this .. Great job
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Without You
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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| yummy this one tickles my fanny good one |
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Re: Without You
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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| I hate burning bridges.. |
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Re: Without You
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:18:22 AM AEST
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| Heavy and sad, vivid and crystal clear pictures painted, beautifully written and composed, thank you for sharing such talent. cool poem. |
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Re: Without You
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:45:02 AM AEST
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emotionally written, good expression,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Without You
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:50:08 PM AEST
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Its bittersweet. I love it.
Great write.
-Isabelle |
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Re: Without You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:28:16 PM AEST
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How torturously sad. But beautifully expressed. Good one, E.
~Breezy |
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Re: Without You
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:56:34 PM AEST
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Sadly touching....well written
Jenni |
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Re: Without You
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:25:43 PM AEST
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| this is pretty sad i post a few poems for you last nigt i hope like them they really mean alot to me i put alot of heart in to them more than usual |
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Re: Without You
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:16:14 PM AEST
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| aw that's so good! sad and good wonderful job! |
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