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Should I promise this
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:25:49 PM in AEST
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You make me promise
Promise not to fall for you
It'll be hard but I'll do my best
Would breaking the promise be faithless
If I keep it what will you do
Maybe its just a test
You make me feel totally restless
My heart is breaking in two
Everything is crushing my chest
If I do fall I'll give everything I got
Hope thats enough
But now your just making me hot
So for now I'll keep the promise
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Re: Should I promise this
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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well i appriciate the promise been kept,its something i want to just fall in between us,i'm sorry if i came out bluntly with the promise,but i just had to say it,it may not be hard for u but its most likely gonna be hard for me,great poem keep up the good work
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Re: Should I promise this
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:35:13 PM AEST
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Good work but the heart don't always listen to the head. The heart has a mind of it's own.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Should I promise this
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:37:38 PM AEST
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This poem is one of the best that i've read!!! Truely, I really loved this poem. Keep up the writing!!
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Re: Should I promise this
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:42:48 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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