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When I'm With You
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:45:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I'm with you I'm alone
I'm in a world of my own
A world where I can be one with my dreams
I know they won't come true
But they make me happy
When I'm with you I'm alone
I feel distant
I feel ignored
I feel unloved
When I'm with you I'm alone
I grow tired easily
Years of the same old thing
It gets tiring after a while
When I'm with you I'm alone
I wish I were lucky in love
Nothing ever works for me
Something I've grown used to
When I'm with you I'm alone
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
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2004-10-31 18:45:03]
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Re: When I'm With You
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by pixie on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:49:18 AM AEST
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awww very sad, well written, great use of emotion *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: When I'm With You
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by midian on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:19:26 PM AEST
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what a beautifal and inspirational poem..
this is really well written
Keep writing ~~ Carly ~~ |
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