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Desperation At Its Worst
Contributed by
SuchGreatHeights
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:27:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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These alibis are stories of romance, something to look for
im driving on my hope, coasting at a hundred miles per hour
straight into headlights, at a brick wall, holding my last breath
i think im out of guts, they were eaten by my regrets,
only 36 days, 36 days, 36 days are left
i want to take back these thoughts
these images of you forgetting me
this pen is my gun, and im out of bullets,your words have got me on my knees
grab some popcorn and some soda, meet your friends,
and watch me fall apart at 7
Every beat reminds me of the pain of avoiding you
and the summer stars are not helping
im talking to noone, im keeping to myself
we are drinking down this poisen and putting our hearts on the shelves
so get away, i dont need to be reminded any more of my mistakes
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SuchGreatHeights
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:33:56 PM AEST
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| very sad poem, the style shows desperation... beautiful write * |
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:50:12 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by LiquidChaos on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:12:59 PM AEST
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| Awesome write...if this was just a quick write I'm gonna go have to read the rest of your stuff...you haven't been listening to Matchbook Romance by any chance have you? |
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:35:49 PM AEST
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wow this was very sad, reminds me a lot of a Hawthorne Heights song or a band like that if you know who they are lol...I really like your work a lot this showed a lot of emotion and potential of being out there and a lot of people relating to it...keep it up and although your pen is out of bullets, you can always reload it...
much love,.
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:36:46 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it!!! |
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Re: Desperation At Its Worst
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:39:15 PM AEST
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I can't put my finger on what I think this one was inspired by, but I think it was another band...very good write
Mason |
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