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will i ...

Contributed by ballistik on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

where is my future....the one i was promised long ago....they said id be happy....not left with only this broke ego....now i cant have nothing...itz intollerable fer the ***** i go through.....i jus wanna be normal....not be forced ta live in the thingz i know....my mind is usually perplexed....confused on the right and wrong...even though i write these lyricz....i dont even know half the meaningz in my songz....ther jus thoughtz lost inside me...telling the story of my fallz....telling it like itz spoken...but breaking it down real small....letting you feel my emotionz...making you see my fearz....helping you understand whatz in me....letting you see the invisible tearz...only inside im whole...but nobody knowz what i want....all they see is this shell...and the thingz that i already got....they cant expect ta see through me....if they only antagonize and yell....so far few have saw all the realness....that my body language is sure ta tell....feel me like im a fragile child...dont force whatz in me ta come out...cause ill break and thas not a lie....unless im given some help....at night my mind is jus out there...letting me see shapez of nothing ive seen....breaking my thoughtz down gradually...but making my life seem obscene....i know ive done some bad thingz...but i know ive also done good...cause if therz only sin in me....id be dead like im sure that i should....cause only in death were our true selvez...the pure and innocent alike....will i be that way in time?.....i highly doubt it but im fer sure gonna fight.....

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Re: will i ... (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:39:13 PM AEST
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Yes!

Fight on!

--Mothy

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