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Contributed by ballistik on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

ferget these feelingz a hate....erased pain still comez back and hauntz me til it achez....chase the rain with torture cant evade this rage it wastez....my mind power cant hold on...my thoughtz are shaped in haste....why must these thingz torment me? cant they see im vaguely tainted?....to many mind sorez got my emotionz to contorted and jaded....waited to long now im long past faded....the irrational takez over til my blood is so thin itz dissipitated.....ive hated to many thingz now my life span has fallen and scattered....throughout the land is happiness but inside my mind im battered...tossed through tribulationz and conquered by all that matterz...they dont see my real feelingz they jus see what i give em which is sadder....i could be gladder but my insidez jus wont let it be...all these thingz convulse within my mind til i slowly bleed....feed me what i want but can any1 do it? i wait and see.....but still ta no avail they jus fill me with maximum greed....tease me til im so unfocused that my werldz a screen...ta play a movie over and over of the same old effin scene....sadness fillz my body til i cant even believe...that therz something out there for me so i dont even fight this disease.....ferget a happy ending i jus wanna suffer and proceed ta end this tragik thing called life and float in the forbidden sea....but will it end there? i bet itz not even the start....itz so messed up inside me that i cant even feel my heart....so many ppl have told me thingz that alwayz fall apart...so who am i ta believe? i cant even conceive that i got this far....

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Re: who carez (User Rating: 1 )
by addicted2selfharm on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:47:35 PM AEST
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Hmm, would be an okay poem, if you used correct grammar. Not "z" for an "s" an s, is an s, not a z. Heh, but other than that great poem, just needs work on the spelling.

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