|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
In too deep
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
From calfornia to london
just to hitch a ride
from easy sushine to cloud
just have a good time
Tripping on your thoughts
there's nothing better to do
forgot who you are
might aswell become self consumed
Cried when you were to happy
Died when you were sad
talked to yourself just for company
untill you become mad
Conflicting against each other
there's always the anouther
got to find the right road slash track
and when i find whats rightfully mine
il give it back
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2004-10-31 14:01:17]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: In too deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by Starlilly on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:08:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
O wow this is realyl good! =)
Great write here! |
|
|
Re: In too deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:55:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| excellent write =] |
|
|
Re: In too deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by Starlilly on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:05:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well done! =) |
|
|
Re: In too deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelliewilliams on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:21:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really loved this poem, I feel what you mean. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
