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Shoulda-Coulda-Woulda
Contributed by
TinaDola
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:46:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Agony, anguish,
I will lend you those.
Rid me of my torturous imagination.
Extra sensory perception
I could have sworn I saw her in my dream;
Caressing your body, embracing your heart…
I should have been her.
Blank, vacant,
My heart left in despair.
Could you see my emotions
Ooze through my chest?
My lips turn a pale shade of blue
As I saw my nightmare lay
On the sheets I once made my cocoon…
I could have been her.
Perplexed, bewildered,
Could you help me comprehend?
Why did you choose to gamble my soul?
Sure you might be lucky ,
But when it came to my love
You went all in and lost it all.
God if only you won that hand.
She wouldn’t exist…
I would have been her.
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TinaDola
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2004-10-31 13:46:42]
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Re: Shoulda-Coulda-Woulda
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 01:48:04 PM AEST
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we are all full of should, coulda,wouldas, well i know I am anyways, lol a very good write, welcome to YPDC *hugs*
takecare
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Re: Shoulda-Coulda-Woulda
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:46:13 PM AEST
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This is a very well written poem. Very sad, but so well written.
"Extra sensory perception
I could have sworn I saw her in my dream;
Caressing your body, embracing your heart…
I should have been her." |
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