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Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I never thought anyone would want me,
I thought they would hate what they could see,
I felt used & abused by ghosts from my past,
I never thought I’d find anything that would last.
I had given up hope on finding anything good,
Didn’t think someone would love me or they could,
That’s why I have trouble believing you are mine,
As soon as you leave my side I start to pine.
I thought that I was a bad person who didn’t deserve,
To ever fall in love & feel her worth,
I have done so many wrong things in my life,
Put so many others through grief & strife.
I looked in the mirror & hated what stared back,
So on myself I would daily launch an attack,
I had no wanting or reason to stay alive,
So into the bottle of vodka I took a dive.
Who’d want an alcoholic whose head was a mess,
One who knew nothing but of pain & stress,
One with traces of self harm on her skin,
One who had thrown all her self esteem into the bin.
I woke up one day with a friendly face staring,
He held me tight, showed me he was caring,
I started to cry as someone finally did love me,
He told me there was so much beauty inside he could see.
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pixie
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2004-10-31 12:54:30]
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:55:08 PM AEST
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| aww. hope you're all better..or getting there; making the climb. |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:55:19 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel, i went through much of the same stuff, im very happy for you. Good job putting your emotions into words like that. |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:09:28 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:03:37 AM AEST
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Wow,
this is very sad but a great ending.
This masterpeice will bring hope to all that read it.
Aweasome!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:05:53 AM AEST
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yet another great emotional write pixie, well done once again.
johnny. |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:31:38 AM AEST
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| Started sad but ended in hope, beautiful poem, written and composed with true feeling, cool poem. |
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Re: Never Though Anyone Could Want Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:57:23 AM AEST
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| Wonderful Write, so full of feeling and ending with great hope............Mike |
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