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Why is it that ... ?
Contributed by
THORN
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:04:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Why is it that,
When you help,
Nobody thanks,
When you thank,
Nobody welcomes,
When you write,
Nobody reads,
When you read,
Nobody listens,
When you try,
Nobody encourages,
When you smile,
Nobody smiles,
When you care,
Nobody gives,
When you die,
Nobody cares.
Why?
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THORN
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by girish on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:41:16 AM AEST
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| thorn you prick me. i care you but your poem cares nobody |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:01:30 AM AEST
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your poem cares me!
it's excellent and it strongly grabs hold of my attention. who's the poem written for?
i'll take extra care an attention in them 'coz i know what its like to be shut out. are they a memeber on this site? |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:06:02 AM AEST
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aww we do care, a sad write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:15:00 AM AEST
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Thought provoking questions. And so very sadly true. Wonderful piece.
Laurie |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:13:05 PM AEST
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who cares?
me. That's who. |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by Swtpea92 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:23:51 PM AEST
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| omg, i really liked that! it was cute! but i hope that you arent feeling like this, cuz that would be a horriable way to feel. but if you do feel this way...i am terriably sorry |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:35:19 PM AEST
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| Good questions, their the same ones i ask to myself every morning and every passing hour. good piece |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:25:48 AM AEST
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Whoa, I wasn't expecting it to be that good! heh -_-;;
Actually, to be honest, I felt that way.. shut out.. Poetry is good when it comes purely from the heart, it's about the poet's emotions to words, a language only other poets would understand..
It's simplicity is what I like about it, I took out a lot of things, got too personal lol.
But life gets better or worse, depending on what you make it.
Again, thanks for commenting etc =)
Btw, I'm not that prickly lol life has its thorns ;)
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:39:38 AM AEST
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And you said im a songwriter lol. This is a good one raye and always remember people do care there just affraid on showing it.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Why is it that ... ?
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:57:54 AM AEST
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*laughs* It doesn't sound like a song... guess it could be haha.. thanks for reading :)
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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