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Autumn Tree
Contributed by
THORN
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:01:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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So sadly its leaves fall,
So gracefully its branches sway,
So strongly it stands,
So bravely it fights,
So mocked by the wind,
So mistreated by children,
So cared for by its owner,
So loved by nature,
So hated by mowers,
So lacked of sun,
So greatly it appears,
So rough it feels,
So patiently it waits,
So far away is Spring,
So close is Autumn,
So sadly its leaves fall
Autumn Tree.
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THORN
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2004-10-31 07:01:15]
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Re: Autumn Tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:07:50 AM AEST
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| It's not that bad, just keep your mind open you'll think up of a way to revise it to your wishes. |
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Re: Autumn Tree
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:52:49 PM AEST
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| this isnt a haiku. haiku poems have the format of 5 syllabuls in the first line, then 7, and then 5. but for a nature poem i dont see why you hate this. this is an amazing poem. |
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Re: Autumn Tree
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:28:20 AM AEST
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| Though it's not a haiku, it is an amazing write with great imagery. Wonderful work. |
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