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A Drop of Water
Contributed by
Novocane
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Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:14:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I still gaze from afar,
every night i dream,
of you,
of my life,
before you left...
now i watch you,
flirting with friends,
ignoring me altogether,
like just another drop of water...
in the sea of your life...
identical...
unimportant...
flowing with the current...
but in your life,
there is always this one drop,
this unique drop,
that resists the flow,
the temptation to fit in,
the addiction of acceptance...
that one drop that stands out,
the first drop to escape the falls...
all to inevitably hit the salty rocks below,
exploding in a splash,
expressing its uniqueness,
a rainbow forms...
showing my love...
i wish to be that drop,
the one you notice,
the one you catch before it breaks on the rocks...
exposing itself to you,
showing its love,
its compassion,
its desire...
to be with you if not for only one second...
is worth all the pain i have suffered.
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Novocane
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Re: A Drop of Water
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:21:04 AM AEST
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| wow, this iz awesome! im 14 az well, IM me sumtime, if u wanna talk... |
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Re: A Drop of Water
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by THORN on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:16:02 AM AEST
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Great write!
Beat this: I'm 13 =P
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: A Drop of Water
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by Novocane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:54:49 AM AEST
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well actually, all but 3 of my poems were written when i was 13, so.. beat that :P
*i have about 12 poems right now, but it only lets me upload 3 every 24 hours..:(* |
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Re: A Drop of Water
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:59:53 AM AEST
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| amazing. =] |
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