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Silver Knife
Contributed by
Hollie85
on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:41:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The knife slowly turns,
deeper and deeper into my skin.
Through the flesh and blood,
and hits the hard white bone.
I am crying tears of blood,
the pain inside is reaching out,
searching for your hand,
to grab onto me and pull me out,
of this dark and sorry place.
How am I going to live without you,
you are my life, my one desire.
I love you with all my heart,
and thought you felt the same as me,
I'll be missing you forever.
Copyright ©
Hollie85
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2004-10-31 02:41:56]
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Re: Silver Knife
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:49:01 AM AEST
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it's dark and really powerful.
i know what it's like to loose some one close to your heart, so this one has hit me really hard...! and i'm also a cutter too.
hey! if you want to chat just PM me ok.
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Re: Silver Knife
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:25:24 AM AEST
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A very moving write, hope everything goes well with you again.
Take Care,
Jane |
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