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Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:33:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cascading tears with
Mascara stream down from your eyes
And stain your face
Put my face to yours and
Steal your tears
I wear them well
So you never would have to
Cry again not for me not again
I won’t ever leave
Dress you in a goddess’s grace
And make you mine with
My embrace
Bite your lips to have a taste
I wear your blood well
See the shimmer on my lips
Dress me up in your arms
We both know you are stronger than me
I need you to survive
I am involved
In everything that you do
Dwelling inside a part of you
I am in love and in love
I am I am a fool
I will never say you are not beautiful
Your wings can’t let me free
I don’t want to fall apart
Lost without your heart
I just want to be with you
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Doriens_Picture
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by thegurl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:40:51 PM AEST (User
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i honestly say that is one of the best poems i have read in a at least a month or two if not longer. I can relate to it and i feel like i want to be the one you are speaking to. excellent wite. |
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:49:02 PM AEST (User
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Exceptional, and sensual, bouond in a dark passion, written in words of burning gold, you have given your poem life and bound it with feeling, beautifully written. |
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:27:43 AM AEST (User
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awesome, i love it!!! |
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hollie85 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:59:39 AM AEST (User
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Very well written. Great angle and real passion in your words. |
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST (User
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aww sad, loving and emotional all wrapped into one,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Never Cry I'LL Never Leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:16:22 AM AEST (User
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aww sad, loving and emotional all wrapped into one,
takecare
pixie xx |
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