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Shockscape
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:24:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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One moment
we were making love
sharing life
talking and laughing,
emotions real deep
feelings of bliss
so sweet and everlasting.
Suddenly
everything
is changing
there is only ill will,
The Illusion
is breaking up
now I can see what's real.
I just don't understand it
when
the resident evil is revealed
I am so damaged
I don't know what to feel.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-10-30 23:24:05]
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Re: Shockscape
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:45:11 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Damage is very hard to overcome but I'm sure it's not impossible.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Shockscape
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:57:28 PM AEST
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| full of sorrow and sadness, tattooed deep within a writhing heart, captured feelings, emotions confused and lost, you have written this beautifully and passionately, and yes pain is real, hurt is harsh, love is nice but like a too sided blade it can carress of it can cut deep. |
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Re: Shockscape
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:17:25 AM AEST
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very sad and emotionally written, hope that your pain subsides soon *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Shockscape
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:03:19 PM AEST
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wow,
very deep, emotional poem, I really enjoyed reading this
keep up the great work
*~Alicia~* |
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