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My Cliff Up In The Sky
Contributed by
lilracer37
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:17:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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This pain is just unreal.
I'm not who I was.
I'm letting go
not going to hold on anymore
what has been done, will stay done
What has been lost, will never be won
I'm jumping now
Off this cliff up so high
and I'm thinking it through
What would i do if I was you?
Would I cry, would I pray
for me or for this day?
Starting to fall
I'm looking up and looking down
I shouldn't of done it.
I should of found a much simpler way.
But it's over, it's done with.
There's no turning back,
faster and faster I fall to the ground.
When finally it's done.
There's no cuts, no bruises, no scratches, no blood.
It was instant, not painful.
There was shock, there was dread,
I'm laying here on this cold flat bed.
with death in my hand,
I did it, It's done
I'm dead, and you're stunned.
Copyright ©
lilracer37
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2004-10-30 21:17:16]
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Re: My Cliff Up In The Sky
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you only did it in your head... Great Poem!
J~ |
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Re: My Cliff Up In The Sky
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:57:15 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: My Cliff Up In The Sky
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:54:16 PM AEST
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i wish more people could take this step...emotionally that is.
good write :) |
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Re: My Cliff Up In The Sky
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:04:48 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, vividlly clear images, painting blinding visuals, and full of emotional feelings, cool poem. |
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Re: My Cliff Up In The Sky
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:05:42 AM AEST
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ohhh very good, i love this poem. Thanks for posting it.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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