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That Fatal Kiss
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:06:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You're swimming through my veins,
Like disease unwanted...
Sinking deeply into my thoughts...
Memories that I'm doubting,
Of things I'd never do....
Yet I see the glimpses,
Glimpses of the pictures,
I can't believe that I kissed you...
And it wasn't bad,
If I remember correctly,
I can feel it lingering,
In places it never was...
I thought it'd take my breath away,
So I'd not breathe again...
Yet I sit here breathing....
Though somewhat more shallow than before,
I can't believe I kissed you...
Though it I don't regret...
Kisses should be special,
And yours I won't forget.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
... [
2004-10-30 21:06:27]
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Re: That Fatal Kiss
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by lilracer37 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:20:05 PM AEST
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very well constructed, if u need someone to talk to my email address is lilracer37@hotmail.com....it sounds like ur struggling with this one kiss, so if u need someone im here for u.
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Re: That Fatal Kiss
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:00:48 PM AEST
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Re: That Fatal Kiss
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:57:58 PM AEST
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I like the flow of this...good write.
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Re: That Fatal Kiss
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 12:07:45 AM AEST
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Kisses are ment to be full of passionate electricity, soundz like you were bitten yet stilled hooked by love, beautifully written, showing visuals that left me stunned, and feelings of confusion, yet with still a hint of true love.
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Re: That Fatal Kiss
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:19:23 AM AEST
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very well expressed, sad and emotional,
takecare
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