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Contributed by
lilracer37
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:02:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I lay here
watching, waiting, hoping, praying
that you will come back
that you will talk to me
that i will have you back
but times change
some people stay the same
but who can you blame
some people change
but how can i arrange
the fact that
I have changed
You have changed
we are so different now
Yet I kept watching
I was still waiting
I found myself hoping
down on my knees praying
But I am stronger now
All because of you
I am weaker now
Because of all you put me through
Even though I waited for you
I know for certain now
You're not mine, you never were
so I'm giving up...
starting now
Copyright ©
lilracer37
... [
2004-10-30 21:02:12]
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Re: Change
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:46:30 PM AEST
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I like your style of writing. You're good.
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Re: Change
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:13:27 PM AEST
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BOOTIFULL~thanx for the compliment but everyone is really good just some people have their good/bad days,this was the only poem of urs i've read so far but it was excellent so i might keep in touch,ur poem was so good,it reminded me of the good charlotte song predictable,thats a good thing,i'm obsessed with them guys,well g2g keep up the awesome writes
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