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Splendorous Pain
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Come into my horror...
You'll be amazed
I live in a different world than yours.
Come into my hauntings
The voices screaming in my ear.
My head is pounding.
And the chills keep me company throughout the night.
Gaze upon my face, you cannot tell,
for you do not understand, what I see well.
Everywhere I look, I see
Blood, pain, potential death
With every object that I touch
I think of a thousand ways to die
and a thousand more to kill.
I smile, pretend it's okay,
yet forevermore, I'll be this way.
Though I long for it to stop,
My lust keeps it alive.
Till death do us part
but not even that, can split us two
I love my pain, too much sometimes
For we've become great friends.
And if she were to leave me
Her nails trailing across my heart as she was swept away
Into oblivion. I would die from her scars.
Because of her I live,
Because of her I die inside
What am I to do? What am I to do?
~I don't want this delightful hurt to lose~
For it has made me all I am
And it has given me life, as it killed me.
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assassinatorgirl
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2004-10-30 20:52:01]
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Re: Splendorous Pain
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:54:32 PM AEST
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| omg this is so good! i love it |
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Re: Splendorous Pain
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by MysticFireFairy on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:12:18 PM AEST
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Oh My Lanta that poem was awsome..really i felt like i was actually seeing a reflection of myself in your poem and such detail you have talent Keep it up!
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Re: Splendorous Pain
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:36:46 PM AEST
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I smile I pretend it's okay........that's so beautiful,great write deep flow...excellent.
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Re: Splendorous Pain
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:32:18 PM AEST
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this is an awesome poem....i have felt this way before...left unsure of what to do next or what to feel.....great job....i loved it
Lots of Love
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Re: Splendorous Pain
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by Versifier on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:41:38 PM AEST
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| WOW!-just magnificent!! |
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