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My True Love
Contributed by
bematt2000
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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If I say i love you.
Yes it will be true.
It will be from the bottom of my heart.
It will be all of my love straight from me to you.
And in my best dream will come true.
And it's only because i am in love with you.
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2004-10-30 20:01:35]
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Re: My True Love
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by mfitzsy on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:52:22 AM AEST
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| A nice short poem getting straight to the point. Think it could do with a second verse though, possibly expanding into the other side the story, the recipitants response for example |
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Re: My True Love
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by Sinn on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:03:57 PM AEST
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| Nice Poem, Short and to the point you have a great tallent and if you keep it up you will go along way |
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