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Love's Curse
Contributed by
LIving_In_My_Dream
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:33:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He couldn't stand the silence,
He couldn't stand the tears,
He couldn't stand his life,
After only sixteen years.
She was his entire world,
She gave him all she possessed,
He did the same in return,
They were thought to be obsessed.
Their love couldn't be reached,
Couldn't be touched by any other,
They were all they needed,
They only wanted each other.
From two they became one,
They made each other whole,
They filled each other's voids,
They filled each other's souls.
Everything was perfect,
Everything was great,
Till one damning day,
They were told they'd have to wait.
Her parents were moving her,
To a distant place,
They'd be torn apart,
Couldn't see each other's face.
They swore they'd make it work,
Vowed to stay together,
Didn't care about the distance,
They'd be together forever.
He gave it all he had,
He did his very best,
But she still slipped away,
He didn't pass the test.
While he was thinking of her,
She had found another,
She said she couldn't do it,
She talked it over with her mother.
He was devastated,
His heart was torn straight out,
He'd been such a fool,
He should have listened to his doubt.
From then on they stopped talking,
Never spoke again,
While she was with her new guy,
He was dreaming of her, the same
Every day he'd cry,
He tried to fight off all the pain,
But the hurting never stopped,
Just shot through every vein.
Months went by since the ending,
But he only grew worse,
He couldn't accept what happened,
This was love's curse.
It finally overtook him,
He couldn't stand it anymore,
He grabbed a picture of her,
And snuck out the front door.
He walked into the woods,
Found a secluded place,
Kept thinking of the past,
And how he'd been replaced.
Hours later he was found,
In a pool of his blood,
And beside him they found,
Her picture in the mud.
On the back read his reason,
Why he took his life,
What she did to him,
It seemed she had held the knife.
Though physically she didn't kill him,
She tore his soul apart,
It was obvious how she did,
It was from a broken heart.
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Re: Love's Curse
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by highly_flammable on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:38:27 PM AEST
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| You are awesome! but what do you mean its yours...? i love the way you put it together. it flows very well. |
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:42:59 PM AEST
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Wow that was very touching...and very sad...but a very awesome write...good job
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:08:07 PM AEST
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Wowed.
An epic of tragedy.
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by mylastwords on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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this is a really beautiful write...keep it up...
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Love's Curse
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:30:55 AM AEST
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OMG that was fantastic, that was one damn good writing bravo. Keep them coming.
Hugs,
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Re: Love's Curse
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:23:20 AM AEST
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so very sad and I felt it deep in my heart, very emotional *hugs*
takecare
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Re: Love's Curse
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:36:51 PM AEST
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| Amazing work dude, keep writing. very few writers can write such stories in a emotional form such as this. |
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Re: Love's Curse
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:29:11 AM AEST
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Very touching deep emotional write that can't but help touch the reader. How sad is that story but how lovely it was writen. Beautifully pieced together, shame the topic had to be so grey but its a true masterpiece in every sence. Very griping story.
Another fantastic write.
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