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Argue Then Make Up!
Contributed by
inoc
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:02:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't tare my heart around my soul,
and leave me hanging out of contol.
The things you said,
makes me feel dead.
My life with you is hanging on a thread.
I love to hear your voice full of cheer,
the way we hold each other all year.
Dancing in rythem ,
seems forever as we listen.
To our future lifes together we use to sneer.
When we make up,
it's the way we wake up.
Tickling ,
and laughing.
The past arguments a shake up.
Create that tough time make it splendid and right,
climb that mountain called life in delight.
Smile and pray,
that things will work out okay.
Life with your loved one will be perfect ,alright?
~~
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-10-30 16:02:14]
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Re: Argue Then Make Up!
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:06:53 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem
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Re: Argue Then Make Up!
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST
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Lovely....Yes indeed, the making up is always better
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Re: Argue Then Make Up!
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by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:26:48 AM AEST
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awww this is a very good write, yes making up is the best part of rowing :)
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Argue Then Make Up!
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:14:15 PM AEST
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making up is great..I need to do that..any suggestions?
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