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Slice Of A Blade.
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My pain is released with the slice of a blade.
This is what I've become, you've made me hate life.
Years of pain, indeed you made me suffer.
Left bruises, scars, inside and out.
I guess it's my fault, I'm the one who let you in...
Thinking you would care, how foolish of me?
You beat me down to nothing,taken away all pride, god why couldn't I have just died?
Ive become addicted to pain, and only you are to blame!
Wen I'm dead I hope you remember my tears, becase I'll be in your nightmares granting your worst fears my bloody face that you beat, I hope you remember.
You'll kill yourself just to get way from the pain, and sadly you're still to blame.
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2004-10-30 14:17:38]
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Re: Slice Of A Blade.
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by surge_joebot on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:20:12 PM AEST
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| that was a really sad poem, so full of pain and hate and emotion... i could just tell... it was very well written too :P |
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Re: Slice Of A Blade.
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:01:10 PM AEST
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Mr. Joebot said everything before I got to it...nice write
Mason |
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Re: Slice Of A Blade.
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:42:08 PM AEST
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wow! very powerful stuff here!
awesome work!
i'm a cutter too. if you're talking to the addiction here i can relate to you.
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Re: Slice Of A Blade.
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by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:31:30 AM AEST
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Very evil poem,
Like it..
But you arent nothing,
Because you can write such beautiful poems..
Remember that..
Have a nice life,
Lord Vince Black |
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Re: Slice Of A Blade.
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by happybunnyfan on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:48:07 AM AEST
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i love it
great write.
i can relate, i to am a cutter
i know the feeling. |
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