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Bloody sapien
Contributed by
namesaretaken
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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One foot ahead one foot behind
With broken knuckles so unkind
An empty mans charge facing the dead
Broken splinted wood across the head
Must not panic become the Zen master
Hearing sirens distance I must sprint faster
Blood on the hands tears on the face
Actions result in another mans coffin lace
Reverting animal instincts the killer ape
Broken silence my innocence Rape
The world is spinning in an Adrenalin haze
Even a mouse will kill to escape an endless maze
Copyright ©
namesaretaken
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2004-10-30 13:48:56]
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Re: Bloody sapien
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:51:32 PM AEST
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Very powerful write...good job
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Re: Bloody sapien
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:29:05 PM AEST
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Seriously intriguing first post, nat (names-are-taken). I'm curious to see what will follow...
Welcome to YPDC! Soon enough, you'll be as addicted as the rest of us!
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Re: Bloody sapien
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:58:01 AM AEST
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powerful stuff! look forward to more from you.
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