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So how can we ever be together?

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Consumed with happiness of what you get.
Deceived with unfaithfulness and regret.
Broken apart,
And frozen to the heart,
How can we ever be together?

To me you’re warm and hopeful.
To them you’re dark and not wonderful.
There’s no point in placing the blame.
Cause in all, we both will suffer the blame,
So how can we ever be together?

Absentmindedly you sigh.
Lonely you make my cry.
All alone when you want to leave,
All you wish to do is deceive.
So how can we ever be together?

You only see what you want your eyes to see.
You only do what you want to be.
Everyone thinks you are defile.
Everyone thinks you should go into exile.
So how can we ever be together?

I wish to love you,
But something I am unable to do.
You can never be in my life so leave,
You can never be apart because you cannot believe.
So how can we ever be together?

Snapping like awkward bones,
Hitting like we’re all stones.
Hating like it doesn’t matter anyway,
‘I love you’ is something you never knew how to say.
So how can we ever be together?

You put me on display,
You act as if it’s okay.
So stop acting like you can’t see.
That you don’t own me.
So how can we ever be together?

I don’t want to see you anymore.
So get out of my life and out that door.
Never come back you hear?
I will never think you’re sincere.
So how can we ever be together?

Copyright Â© frozensuicide ... [ 2002-11-18 13:00:00]
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Re: So how can we ever be together? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:15:01 PM AEST
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rhyming too words together is always a no no. your use of the "So how can we ever be together" was almost repetetive. for a better ending you might have stated why you wanted to ever be together.

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