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The So-called Friend
Contributed by
symptom_recital
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Oh dear, my dear, it seems quite clear
That your reality
In one word, is quite absurd
and silly as can be.
Why do you not have a clue
About the choices that we've made?
Does it really baffle you
That all we want is to drink and get laid?
You, in fact, are lacking tact
Intrusive questions, evil looks.
It's not fine, you've crossed the line,
Just go back to your books.
Behind your eyes all that lies
Is an empty space
Ignorance is bliss and you're in the abyss
With the rest of the human race.
You've come through life without pain or strife.
And i'm so happy for you.
I just hope you can cope, if one day you choke
And luck turns his back on you.
Copyright ©
symptom_recital
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2004-10-30 13:41:08]
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Re: The So-called Friend
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:45:55 PM AEST
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This piece really spoke to me...as I too have a friend like this...very good poem
Mason |
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Re: The So-called Friend
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by inoc on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:16:02 PM AEST
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I like how you worded this poem!
a good write indeed
cheers!~ |
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Re: The So-called Friend
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:19:08 PM AEST
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Right on.
Take that you
priveleged,
ignorant,
selfish
suckheads.
--MOthy |
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