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My Love
Contributed by
evilkitty
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:25:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My Love
My Love, You Are My World
You Are My Cure
You Are The One I Turn To In My Hour Of Need
You Are The I Know I Could Never Leave
You Are My Mind,
Body,
And Soul
My Love You Make Me Whole
My Love Your Make My World Go Round
You Make My Feet Float Off The Ground
You Take My Soul To Places That Were Once Unknown
You Send Me Souring Ever Higher
With You I Can Touch The Sky
My Love
You Are My Mind,
Body,
And Soul,
My Love You Make Me Whole.
My Love.
Copyright ©
evilkitty
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2004-10-30 13:25:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:27:39 PM AEST (User
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Awwww this is so sweet! Beautiful. Your fiance will love this.
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:48:51 PM AEST (User
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That was a beautifully sweet poem. Very nice job...
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:29:01 AM AEST (User
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such a sweet write, im sure he will love it,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilkitty on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:40:42 AM AEST (User
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Im author of this poem.....a week after this poem was written i figured out my fiance had cheated on and I ended it. |
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:54:48 AM AEST (User
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(sigh) I don't even know where to begin. I was going to say this was such a lovely poem... I was going to prattle on about how nice it must be........
... then I read your comment. I'm so sorry.
I'm happy though that you've found YPDC. There is a ton of terrific poetry here, fabulous poets (many broken hearted ones, I might add), lots of madness in the forums... something for everyone. It is a great place to go to.... well, get your mind off everything else for while. I do hope you keep writing and keeping posting - I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Welcome to YPDC! I'm sorry to hear it's a difficult time for you, but I'm certain you will find lots of support and compassion here-
*hugs*
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilkitty on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:59:45 PM AEST (User
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ok its me agin (the writer) me and my fiance have worked things out because it turns out he didnt actually cheat i was just told that by somwionw else. |
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