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Rotten
Contributed by
Nixzy
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:49:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Rotting away like the corpse that I am,
Dead to the world nothing to save me,
Nobody can,
Nobody cares and no one can see,
Just how much this is hurting me.
I want to be fresh and new to the earth,
I want to be born again beautiful at birth,
But look at me now I’m crumbling away,
Paler and paler to this very day.
I can’t help any one theres no good left inside,
Kicked away from the world,
It’s best if I hide.
Copyright ©
Nixzy
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2004-10-30 12:49:08]
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Re: Rotten
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:54:42 PM AEST
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we do care, another very emotional filled write from you, keep writing, my poetry has kept me going through some of my darkest times,
takecare
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Re: Rotten
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by DeathByLove on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:21:37 PM AEST
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| So I see your writing is much like many of my published ones. I write very morbid death things that I dont put on here for peoples sake. Just a reminder it sounds like your going to be blown away into the crowd of emo people. Change of writing somtimes helps with many surprises |
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Re: Rotten
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:37:11 AM AEST
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filled with so much pain...it hit so close to home for me...you did a great job bro
summer |
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