|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Please, don't ask me to stay
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Please, don’t ask me to stay
You look directly into my eyes and plead
How can nobody else see what I see?
Please, don’t ask me to stay
I remove my hand from yours and slowly walk
I don’t care what they say, just let them talk
Please, don’t ask me to stay
You know I hate leaving you when I must
How do I prove to them this is more than dead end lust?
You stare out of the window and smile to yourself
And together we’ve somehow stopped time
And no one else exists in this world
When you hold me and whisper, ‘mine.’
Please, don’t ask me to stay
I can’t look you in the eye when you do
No one else matters when it’s just me and you
Please, don’t ask me to stay
When I promise I’ll see you again soon
And all I think about is the next meeting, and you’re thinking about it too
Please, don’t ask me to stay
When you know how badly I want to agree
Judgemental eyes somehow become blind when you’re here holding me
You stare out of the window and smile to yourself
Nothing else matters anymore
You stare at me so innocent; so oblivious
What choice do I have left but to fall?
Please, don’t ask me to go
When there’s anything we can get through
And you stare out the window and smile to yourself
I can’t help but fall for you.
Copyright ©
carmen_queasy
... [
2004-10-30 10:15:41]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Please, don't ask me to stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:16:49 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
aww a very emotional and sad write, written with such feeling,
takecare,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Please, don't ask me to stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:41:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love the way it turns..please don't ask me to go; nice. |
|
|
Re: Please, don't ask me to stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:02:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very beautiful. . . wonderful write!
Laurie |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
