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The Girl I loved
Contributed by
tan
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:23:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I loved a girl
when I was young
there was joy abound
every song she sung.
She was pretty
she was a rose
and i went red
when she came too close.
Her heart so pure
her words so kind
I could tell her even if
I was a blind.
My heart raced
everytime she smiled
and nothing felt bad
Nothing vile.
I loved her then
I miss her now
but I know we'll meet
someday, somehow.
Copyright ©
tan
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2004-10-30 08:23:28]
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Re: The Girl I loved
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:46:36 AM AEST
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aww this is so sweet, your undying love for her is shown in every stanza. its a moving piece.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: The Girl I loved
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:16:41 AM AEST
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| I loved the ending, it gave hope :) |
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