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What I See...
Contributed by
mylastwords
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 06:38:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I see you sitting in the corner...
Crying...
I'm sorry...
The pain, the anger, the sadness...
I see it in your eyes...
I hear it in your voice...
I feel it in your touch...
I'm sorry...
You conceal your soul...
Put up these walls...
That can't be broken down...
I want to help you...
But you won't let me in...
You won't tell me what's up...
All you do is cry...
I'm so sorry...
I tried to help...
But all I did was hinder more...
All I can say is that I'm sorry...
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Re: What I See...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:44:13 AM AEST
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a sad write, it must be hard when the person you are trying to help puts up those barriers, they are so hard to break down, I am sure that you did everything that you could possibly do to help, you have a great heart,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: What I See...
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:36:44 AM AEST
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| i agree with pixie. sometimes they need to come to you, and wont accept if you go to them first. ::shrugs:: |
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