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SERAPHIM
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ArdRi79
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:55:09 AM in AEST
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Flying high on angels wings
sweet seraphim
she sheds her crimson tears for me
The bloody jewels of my crown
my lovely thrall
the apple of my bloodshot...EYE
How long till
it all falls into the sea
when mother earth
opens up her ancient gaping wounds
and swallows us all
whole into eternity
Fallen angels with broken wings
battered seraphim
through the ashes of the world we crawl
Of the deluge we drink and drown
never enough
to wash away our sins and lies
Flying high on angels wings
sweet seraphim
she sheds her crimson tears for me
The bloody jewels of my crown
my lovely thrall
the apple of my bloodshot eye
Flying high on angels wings
sweet seraphim
she sheds her crimson tears for EVERYBODY
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Re: SERAPHIM
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by THORN on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:31:46 AM AEST
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Great work!
The repetative lines work really well,
emphasizing the meaning behind this work, it's nice work ;)
Cheers,
-Raye |
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Re: SERAPHIM
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:42:13 AM AEST
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| wow, i love it!!! |
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Re: SERAPHIM
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:47:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, written very well. Thanks for sharing it.
Huggs,
Jane x |
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Re: SERAPHIM
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:26:41 AM AEST
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| This completely blew me away. |
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Re: SERAPHIM
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:39:05 AM AEST
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| amazing write. you have written this well and with emotion. keep it up. =] |
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