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Waterfall
Contributed by
THORN
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:32:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Hear the water rush,
So continuously it pours,
So endlessly it sounds
See how gracefully it falls,
So swiftly it moves,
So beautifully it reflects
Feel its calmness,
So soothing,
So relaxing
Smell its freshness,
So clean,
So sweet
Waterfall.
Copyright ©
THORN
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2004-10-30 03:32:34]
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Re: Waterfall
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:39:58 AM AEST
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This is cute, i know the feeling of this.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Waterfall
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by THORN on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:11:17 AM AEST
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Cute? lol
Well, thanks... :)
Cheers,
-Raye |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:51:34 AM AEST
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This shows the beauty but I think you could have added a bit more of the power they wield in nature. Yet a very good write. I love the ones in Jamaica. They are so mesmerizing.
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Rita |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:49:59 AM AEST
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| very nice. |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:43:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery here..Lovely write overall..
Jenni |
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Re: Waterfall
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by THORN on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:48:11 AM AEST
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The poem was a request of 17 lines or so, so I stuck to it ;)
Otherwise, I would've went on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on... :P
Thanks, the rest.
Cheers,
-Raye |
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Re: Waterfall
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by TedHuggableBare on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:44:20 AM AEST
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| A waterfall is so refreshing and can bring the senses to an everlasting peace! |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a good write. I enjoy watching a waterfall as it gracefully falls. Very well done. *S* Cynthia |
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