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My Time With You
Contributed by
Renstar
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:13:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my time with you
my time with you
you will never understand
the way u made me feel
when ur weapon of choice was a hand
although the silent pain will never go away
i am comforted in the knowledge that one good thing u have done
is make me a stronger person today
so i will not hang my head in shame
and i refuse to be overcome by the silent pain
for i can feel the beat of my heart returning
and for the touch of a man my body is yearning
i feel the light streaming back into my darkness
i feel the awakening of my soul
i feel i am finally ready to move on
now that i have found what you stole
i feel so much life i finally again feel whole
and no longer will i feel blue
for deep in my past is where i choose to leave
my time with you
Ren*
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Renstar
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2004-10-30 02:13:34]
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Re: My Time With You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:12:21 AM AEST
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Very good write and outpour of emotion. I have found in life that generally that is the best place to leave unhappiness, in the past.
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Rita |
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Re: My Time With You
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:27:06 AM AEST
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Wow what an amzing write this is, you have written your feelings well and i thank you for sharing it with us.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My Time With You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:50:24 AM AEST
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such a moving write, the past is sometimes very hard to let go of, I hope that you will love again someday,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: My Time With You
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:53:40 AM AEST
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| excellent write. you are an admirable person for being able to do this. =] |
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Re: My Time With You
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:41:43 PM AEST
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| I have read all your writtings...they are all excellent...you are definitely a talent......Shari |
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