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Melting
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:26:03 AM in AEST
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I like it
rising to the top
never ever
wanna it to stop,
I laugh I smile
love it
when I feel this way
on the edge of wild
In a daze.
you may call it love
or maybe lust
whatever
it feels so nice
sexy sensations
over flowing
tears of joy
exploding
from my eyes.
Tremble melt and flow
ohhh
I can only moan,
contortions of my body
are revealing
gonna get it
gotta have it all.
well I gotta go now
cause my soul's ablaze,
feeling such satisfaction
In emotional reactions
and I
never ever ever
want this moment to fade.
I laugh I smile I shake
In a daze
love to be this way.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-10-30 00:26:03]
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Re: Melting
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:30:43 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and sensual, feelings of overload, and bliss, awesome visual images created, composed with a beautiful rythem and style, and written with such passion, cool poem and a very enjoyible read. thank you for sharing this poem. |
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Re: Melting
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:50:34 AM AEST
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Wwwwooo hot, hot, hot!
Uh huh, I hear ya.
Very seneous, tantalizing, ummmm.
Now u got me dremaing again but I don't mind the dreming as I feel wat cha jus discribed when I dream with ya.
A masterpeice of hope.
luv, hugg, smiles, longings,
emy |
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Re: Melting
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:29:54 AM AEST
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Wow....really sensual and sweet...Loved it...
Jenni |
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Re: Melting
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:31:28 AM AEST
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wow this is passionate, loving it lol.
Jane x |
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Re: Melting
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:00:23 AM AEST
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| Awesome write :) |
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Re: Melting
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:56:31 AM AEST
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wow, this was an amazingly hot write, very, very naughty lololol
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Melting
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:00:44 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Melting
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by Deathly_Rose on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 07:23:08 AM AEST
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Wow, that's a really good poem ^.^ this is the first oen that I've read from you, but it's really good, so I'm gonna read more ^.^ lmao
Well keep up the good work ^.~
-waves-
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Melting
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:29:13 PM AEST
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Oh you're so bad.
I like you very much.. |
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