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My favorite dandelion
Contributed by
pumpkinpie
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:02:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Close to her, between her concrete walls I kneel
As her eyes look into mine with unassailable zeal
Her little heart radiates as always with such felicity
She's my angel, my shining star, my little sweetie
She may not transcend the beauty of a blooming flower
But her exquisite heart exceeds the flower's exterior
And she may ressemble a wilted dandelion
But if you look real close, you'll see the beauty within
We meet each Friday and it's always the same
She bounces on me with her black and white frame
She gives me her paw and expects some hugs
And so I settle my face inside her fur,so soft,so snug
We've fed our friendship with trust and love
An unbreakble bond thrust high above
I fear the day when I won't be seeing her again
But I'll be happy for the joy in her heart which I helped to obtain
Copyright ©
pumpkinpie
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2004-10-29 23:02:35]
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by runaway0516 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:24:29 PM AEST
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| great write keep writing :) |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:26:24 PM AEST
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| Cool poem, everyone needs friends, and pets are the best one can have, awesome write, beautiful too read. |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:39:21 PM AEST
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Beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:40:52 AM AEST
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This is so sweet. Furbabies are the best friends in the world. I love this!!
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:40:16 AM AEST
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There is such affection in your words....you going will be the best Vet. who ever practiced! :o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 07:15:34 AM AEST
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Just delightful! Animals are so loving, giving, trusting. They look at us the way we should look at God. Lovely.
Stitch |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:15:02 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. You are going to be a wonderful vet.
Spazzo |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Karazoul on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 08:02:40 PM AEST
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dog are a great friend
Good writting
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:47:52 PM AEST
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so beautiful and heartfelt, animals are so precious... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 03:32:56 PM AEST
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| awww bless!!! i found myself totally relating to this piece its strange how something so little can give some much by just being them!! you've wrote this so well sweetie. 'And so I settle my face inside her fur,so soft,so snug' i think trhats such a cute line really descripotive and accurate! i loved this!!!x |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Archie on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:51:45 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. It is true that friendships come in all shapes and sizes. |
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:52:29 AM AEST
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Friendships definitely come in all shapes and sizes. Pets can be our best friends too. This is truly an awesome wonderful inspiring write. Thank you. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Re: My favorite dandelion
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 04:49:10 PM AEST
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A lovely poem, very very nice!
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