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Tears
Contributed by
lilracer37
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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They are building up
They are breaking down
They glide so easily
all the way to my frown
they fall and they fall
they just keep comming
never stopping
never slowing
why do I go through this
why do i care
why do I live my life
knowing your not there
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2004-10-29 20:54:28]
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Re: Tears
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:00:01 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, never doubt yourself. If you need to talk you can email me my email addy is gohonrules_2002@yahoo.com. If you want to just talk i'm here for you ok.
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Re: Tears
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST
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| good poem i like it just remember ur not alone lots of us feel way |
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Re: Tears
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by dragon on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:34:01 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I'm really sorry you feel this way, just know that your not alone. Everyone feels this way from time to time, some just feel this way more. If you ever want to talk you can always email me. My email is Angelkaeforever@aol.com, just in the sub. put from ypdc
I hope everything works out and you feel better soon
always
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Re: Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:12:54 AM AEST
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A very hunting moving poem, hope everything goes well with you.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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