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Inspire by Desire
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:39:44 PM in AEST
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Drip away the insanity grasping your brain
choking you bashing your head until you bleed
let me help you please you need me i need no one you are nothing
but you are everything get away come here i need you
i could die from your sight i cant think straight
nothing everything affects how i feel can you see
i am blind but the wind in your eyes shows your sense of smell
i can't breathe my lungs disinigrated all i can do is bleed here
stop doing this it hurts but pain doesn't come anymore why should i let you
see me how i am i am nothing but everything there is you'd all die
with out me but you wouldn't care you'd laugh why must everything be
so confusing and frightening SILENCE GIRL! no, i dont fear anything but everything
you keep trying to make me see but i told you i'm blind though i see
all that there is and it bores me i cant sleep because of this
screaming in my ear the voices don't stop and they push me to a wall
and nail my neck into a rope and tie it tightly you cant stop dreaming
these nightmares are haunting but nothing will stop them because you were born
to live in this frightful world but it doesn't scare you and you can't reach anyone
because they look down upon you up at your greatness and kick you in worship
they lick you as if you mean nothing screaming in the pleasure you provide
though you don't feel any of it because you cant feel when you feel everything there is
every emotion wrapping itself possessively around you guarding you from the death you long for
scream for mercy but they do not hear they ignore any cries you beg and plead
no one has mercy and they destroy everything and leave you for the animals
to be devoured what a splendorous feeling you love it you know but you hate me with a firey passion
tearing me limb from my insanity in my head is where i live and i cannot think about anything
except your haunting memory and it makes me yell STOP you bring too much pain
with this happiness I've never felt if I was pretending but who could dream that i'd turn
and stop thinking how i did and if i let Her take me over and use me and rip apart my back
She hates me I love her so enamored in Her warmth do i let myself be used or do i fight
i'm so confused and you try to make it clear to me but i saw the light and it burned me
so i took the darker path to let the darkness caress my skin into a peaceful slumber of death
where nothing makes everything is logical and no one will see me but everyone will remember
how i betrayed everything i believed in for Her and i'll never give up this is my inspiration.
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assassinatorgirl
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2004-10-29 20:39:44]
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:22:39 PM AEST
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AhhhhhhSweet dreams of death.........I too can relate. :"When I die you will all be sorry!!!"
Little did I know they would have loved it...people with no feelings cannot feel the loss of anyone!!!
This poem was most interesting, was loaded with feelings, and I'm so glad you are a wonderful poet........for you can unload through your pen and not carry these horrid feeling around as excess baggage!!!
Warm Poetic Hugs
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:59:43 PM AEST
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| HOLY ***** THIS IZ AWESOME!!! |
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:38:59 AM AEST
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| A beautifully visual and heavy write, full of confused and heartfelt feelings, leaving me chilled and astounded at the same time, awesome poem and freaky story, cool to read, thank you for sharing a very visual talent to mezmerise. |
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by screwup on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:10:14 AM AEST
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kindredblood said it so well... job well done on a difficult piece...
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by skyblumoon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:40:53 PM AEST
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Pure power.
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Re: Inspire by Desire
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:37:11 PM AEST
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WOW!.....i dont know what to say.....that was an amazing poem....so much power behind it....it left me speechless....absolutely outstanding job.....i loved it!!!
Lots of Love
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