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Starting to fade
Contributed by
brokenbylove130
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:53:42 PM in AEST
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im, im trying to hold on
trying not to give it up now.
my, my face is turning red,
because my hands are bleeding.
//my grip is getting loose now,
i can feel the sweet surrender,
im starting to fall,
starting to fade//
now oh what do i see
your face is staring right down at me.
please, im reaching out my hand
i beg of you to please just save me.
//my grip is getting loose now,
i can feel the sweet surrender,
im starting to fall,
starting to fade//
its too late now youve lost your chance (to be my hero)
im all gone now and its all your fault (all your fault)
your grip is getting loose now,
cant you feel the sweet surrender?
your starting to fall
im watching you fade.
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Re: Starting to fade
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:24:58 PM AEST
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sounds like something by lacuna coil, or evanescence..not that that is a bad thing those are wicked bands...this one has great potential!!!
blessed be
sirena
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Re: Starting to fade
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:26:36 PM AEST
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| fantastic lyrics. i like them. =] |
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Re: Starting to fade
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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| i love it, its awesome! |
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Re: Starting to fade
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:29:52 PM AEST
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| good stuff, seems kinda like senses fail (the new cd, let it enfold you) nice stuff, if ur in a band u could work wonders with this. keep up the writing! peace |
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