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So wonderful
Contributed by
taryn
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:39:34 PM in AEST
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oops
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I go outside and feel the gentle breeze,
wander through the wet grass,
and run with the butterflies.
I lay down and think,
think of the beautiful trees,
think of the happy children,
think of the amazing sky.
Everyone is happy,
the whole world is happy.
I suddenly feel strange,
someone's shaking me,
but I see no one.
Wait now I do,
and I wake up from these wonderful things.
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taryn
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2004-10-29 18:39:34]
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Re: So wonderful
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:30:55 PM AEST
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| =] excellent write. |
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Re: So wonderful
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by wakegurl77 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:26:59 PM AEST
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dreams of perfect town everyone has them
Great Write
Allways sincere
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Re: So wonderful
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by Sinned on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:25:31 PM AEST
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You paint a prettry picture until you wake up.Your ryming was good,but go back to sleep the world is still mostly a beautiful place.Keep writting
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