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The End
Contributed by
elatednbliss
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:58:35 PM in AEST
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Suicidal,suicidal
Everything is suicidal
But who am I? But who am I?
To judge what is suicide?
Don't you see the knife in his hand?
He's finally going through with his plan.
Don't you see the gun in her mouth?
She thinks that it's her only way out.
Don't you see the pills in his hands?
He's doing this cuase noone understands.
Don't you see the rope at her throat?
She's crying as she lets go of the note that she wrote...
Suicidal, suicidal
everything is suicidal
But who am I? But who am I?
To judge what is suicide?
These are the thoughts of those that life did neglect...
So since everything is suicidal...
What did you expect???
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2004-10-29 15:58:35]
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Re: The End
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by theMoth on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:03:07 PM AEST
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Because of the catchy rhymes
this was somehow
a "fun" read.
A good one.
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Re: The End
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by assassinatorgirl on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:39:08 PM AEST
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| aw that makes me feel bad about wanting to kill myself all those times. Yeah, you're right. Suicide is so seductive and it seems like people are doing it for stupid reasons they give up so easily they are weak. It's because people don't feel wanted. =/ even tho' deep inside they know they are. they sometimes just let emotions get the better of them. |
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