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love...
Contributed by
elatednbliss
on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love is a flame
that burns down in hell
and love is a story that I'll never tell...
Love pushed me down in it's pits within
And I'll be damned if I was tricked again...
To believe in true love it's just all a lie
And love's laughing so hard at me that it's begun to cry...
So now I understand this purpose for me
that I never really had a so called "ment to be"
So I continue n this road all alone
Becuase it's my destiny to be on my own...
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elatednbliss
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2004-10-29 15:47:10]
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Re: love...
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:50:14 PM AEST
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| Excellent job... It flows beautifully. |
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Re: love...
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by falling_octember on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:52:29 PM AEST
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| i know what you mean.......but i do belive i am in love but i'll never tell her she loves someone else. and as she says in her poems always will......i think i've said to much...anways.....you should always belive in love for as long as you belive anything is possible...maybe if i say it enough i'll start to belive it myself |
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Re: love...
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by emocutie07 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:12:40 PM AEST
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| .... I ::Loved:: your poem hehe flowed very nicely, with such strong emotion..but is it possible not to love?, even if its something simple like ice cream,your best friend..or summer days, any who, I hope you that someday and im sure ya will find someone that tugs on your heart strings in that oh soo special way.. maybe even finding love for your self...or the love of God....and Im sure their are many that just adore you! so keep on truckin hun |
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