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Masquerade
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:42:29 PM in AEST
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My smile can be deceiving
More often than not
It's just another front
So intensely fake
It's almost painful
But you'd never know the difference
Cause you've never really taken the time
To get to know me
To understand me
You say I'm always happy
But don't judge a person
Until you've walked a mile
In their shoes
I laugh, but I still hurt
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ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-29 15:42:29]
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Re: Masquerade
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by ElatedNBliss on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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| so true so true |
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Re: Masquerade
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by falling_octember on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:03:26 PM AEST
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| so much truth and honesty.......i belive you should never judge a person unless you;ve really got to know them ......or don't judge them at all |
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Re: Masquerade
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:11:24 PM AEST
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| Sadly I tend to do the same thing. The more pain I feel the happier I portray myself to be. =/ You need to try to stop hiding, from other people and yourself. Its the only way. Good luck. |
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Re: Masquerade
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by theMoth on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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Good write.
I don't pretend though.
I just ignore everyone
and their bleachy smiles.
--Mothy |
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Re: Masquerade
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by emocutie07 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 06:18:42 PM AEST
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| I really liked this, and its something soo many can relate too, kinda sad, but soo true...if only we could all just be happy with areselves, and not have the burden of worrying what others thought, or might think if they find out the truth, but I guess sometimes you get soo tired of pretending and then everythings a mess ....ehh sorry for the ramblings nice write, cant wait to read more of your work.... |
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Re: Masquerade
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:39:32 PM AEST
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| Very impressive poem. And its so true... people do need to try and get to know people better. |
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